Week Seven

Week Seven Day One- We received feedback from our rough cut we had some good veiws and also some bad- the majority was not good. We decided we would think of a whole new narrative for our music video so it wouldnt be so predictable and more interesting. We also decided to ask people that were drama students to be involved in it. By doing both of these things we thought we would come out with a better outcome- which would lead to better grade.
Week Seven Day Two- We did a lesson on narrative theory, this helped us with our ideas and how to make sure our narrative was clear and how it could compare with Todorov's theory- this also gave us more ideas of how we could play around with our idea.
Week Seven Day Four- We compared how our music video narrative compared with what Todorov's theory was and also how it constrasted with this. We thought our new storyline fitted in with what Todorov's theory was as our storyline includes a initial balance, occurance and a new equilibirum. We have wrote exactly how this fits in with our storyline above.